/anthro/ - Anthropomorphic

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>>124869 (OP) 
Alright node, here’s your first opponent.

>>124873
Are the flags weighted? I swear I keep getting peteena.

>>124869 (OP) 
Sylva will NEVER be black coded since she's clearly white in those pics

>>124874
you also sometimes get an unknown individual

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>>124873
Humanity's champion, a worthy opponent
>>124878
she got that mudda fuggin vitiligo nyagga

>>125114
>vitiligo 
she's michael jackson?

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>BOOOOOO!

Where did her flag go? And Asaiko's too.

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>>125507
Not sure, but if the mods want to add back the missing flags here they are. I went ahead and updated the Sylva flag to match her current iteration

>>125508
Rename Sylva to Scarylva 😨

>>125508
@froge add this

>>125508
bro it only took me a month but I just finished reading chapter 2. For being a writer or whatever, I fluffing hate reading, probs because I did my life's share of that shit as a whelp. There were a handful of grammatical errors, but it's good overall. It's been a while since I read the first two sections (and I accidentally read earlier draft versions of them instead), so I'm likely forgetting some stuff, but I do have some questions like how in the world everyone so happens to speak the same language. I am enjoying the grotesque character designs and worldbuilding.
The one thing I'd add, really, is just illustrations of the different species and maybe even major characters. That is: I'd embed them in the text itself, or as an attachment or collection somewhere. I say this because, at least early on in those drafts I mentioned, some species names just get namedropped without further description and I'm left scratching my head. Maybe a glossary too for certain terms like "parcel". Though that's not nearly as essential. It's pretty easy to infer those. Especially since the worldbuilding is so alien and it's sci-fi, I think these could work. Think like "species profiles" embedded somewhere in the text.
Maybe that's addressed in the revisions or others have already pointed it out before me, in which case: sorry. gek.

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>>125521
>how in the world everyone so happens to speak the same language
In the prologue, the Elanians know the human language through translation equipment. In the later chapters everyone is Elanian so they all speak the same language. There will be some language barrier issues later on
>The one thing I'd add, really, is just illustrations of the different species and maybe even major characters
Perhaps there can be a collection at the back showing what each species looks like or they can be placed in between chapters as they become relevant
>some species names just get namedropped without further description and I'm left scratching my head
It's a bit difficult to introduce so many species and give them adequate descriptions without slowing the pace to a crawl, but I'll see what I can do
>Think like "species profiles" embedded somewhere in the text
Like a Mass Effect type codex entry? I don't want to do too much lore dumping outside the story itself but perhaps a brief overview is fine

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We will be airdropping this behind humoid lines so they are too distracted to fight back

Also a random little useless detail is that I limited myself to three lines per letter for Myra's dialogue. This is a subtle hint that meebs are retarded

>>125583
But I wanna hear Meebs go on long monologues though...

Also, this wouldn't distract me... not one bit.

>>125583
>This is a subtle hint that meebs are retarded
gek
also nice stuff