New Reply[×]
Name
Email
Subject
Message
Files Max 8 files48.1MB total
Tegaki
Password
Flag
[New Reply]


Banner
Read the RULES before posting.

Movie night at >>122860

Remember to support your fellow 'Booleans!
Gems Meta Art
Magma


p1.png U A
[Hide] (465.6KB, 1200x1000) Reverse
Replies: >>123150
p2.png U A
[Hide] (111.8KB, 1200x1000) Reverse
p3.png U A
[Hide] (119.5KB, 1200x1000) Reverse
p4.png U A
[Hide] (119.6KB, 1200x1000) Reverse
p5.png U A
[Hide] (120.3KB, 1200x1000) Reverse
p6.png U A
[Hide] (124.9KB, 1200x1000) Reverse
p7.png U A
[Hide] (136.2KB, 1200x1000) Reverse
p8.png U A
[Hide] (146.8KB, 1200x1000) Reverse
p9.png U A
[Hide] (137.4KB, 1200x1000) Reverse
p10.png U A
[Hide] (263KB, 1200x1000) Reverse
p11.png U A
[Hide] (129.5KB, 1200x1000) Reverse
p12.png U A
[Hide] (166.3KB, 1200x1000) Reverse
p13.png U A
[Hide] (167.1KB, 1200x1000) Reverse
p14.png U A
[Hide] (171KB, 1200x1000) Reverse
p15.png U A
[Hide] (131.1KB, 1200x1000) Reverse
p16.png U A
[Hide] (25.3KB, 1200x1000) Reverse
p17.png U A
[Hide] (97.7KB, 1200x1000) Reverse
Replies: >>123126
p18.png U A
[Hide] (219.6KB, 1200x1000) Reverse
p19.png U A
[Hide] (202.1KB, 1200x1000) Reverse
p20.png U A
[Hide] (274.3KB, 1200x1000) Reverse
p21.png U A
[Hide] (178.1KB, 1200x1000) Reverse
p22.png U A
[Hide] (77.6KB, 1200x1000) Reverse
p23.png U A
[Hide] (119KB, 1200x1000) Reverse
p24.png U A
[Hide] (198.5KB, 1200x1000) Reverse
p25.png U A
[Hide] (222.2KB, 1200x1000) Reverse
Replies: >>123126
p26.png U A
[Hide] (52.4KB, 1200x1000) Reverse
p27.png U A
[Hide] (218.7KB, 1200x1000) Reverse
p28.png U A
[Hide] (311.3KB, 1200x1000) Reverse
p29.png U A
[Hide] (295.3KB, 1200x1000) Reverse
p30.png U A
[Hide] (282.2KB, 1200x1000) Reverse
p31.png U A
[Hide] (137.5KB, 1200x1000) Reverse
p32.png U A
[Hide] (162.6KB, 1200x1000) Reverse
p33.png U A
[Hide] (164.8KB, 1200x1000) Reverse
p34.png U A
[Hide] (101.7KB, 1200x1000) Reverse
p35.png U A
[Hide] (165.5KB, 1200x1000) Reverse
p36.png U A
[Hide] (138.5KB, 1200x1000) Reverse
p37.png U A
[Hide] (105.5KB, 1200x1000) Reverse
p38.png U A
[Hide] (111.8KB, 1200x1000) Reverse
p39.png U A
[Hide] (140.1KB, 1200x1000) Reverse
that's as far as i have gotten so far. can't tell if i'm starting to feel burnt out, but maybe posting my progress will help motivate me to not abandon this
Replies: >>123133 >>123150
It's kino
>>123118
>>123119
This has a lot of emotion in it, but how did she survive while naked inside a container in the winter?
Is that Asher? I wasn't sure I recognized him without his goggles or his sword, but "fjellrev" is Norwegian for "Arctic fox."

Also,

>we

I assume Asher is there as a representative of some organization, then.  Perhaps it will be made more clear what's going on.

General impressions:  hmm, is that a Ljungman AG42 he's using?  Probably not, it had a reciprocating top cover and it would have been very difficult to mount an optical sight.  Gewehr 43 with a ZF4, maybe?

He comes across as competent.  I assume the humans were just criminals and not soldiers.  One of them just saw his buddy get shot and he just stands there mindboggled, pointing his gun off into the distance until he gets it too.  You'd think he'd have had the wit to seek cover or at least concealment, but maybe he didn't.

Our hero doesn't seem to have made any efforts to hide the bodies or otherwise conceal his activities.  But I suppose the snow is going to cover the bodies shortly, and the footprints too.

>>123126
>how
The magic of collie floof.
Replies: >>123135
>>123122
have you thought about combining all the frames into a gif/video?

maybe you could add some sound effects and ambience
also its very kino and 'boo pilled
>>123126
thanks!
>how did she survive while naked inside a container in the winter?
she has fur, though i think she would still freeze given the situation so you have a point. i'm realizing how many flaws my story has, and i have made quite a few changes already
>>123131
i should clarify, that is NOT asher
>is that a Ljungman AG42 he's using?
yes, and fluff i should have watched a video of it firing first. it's a side rail, though i guess he could drill something into the side of the wood. i really liked the look of a scoped ag42
i'm not answering the other questions because i think they will be answered soon
>>123133
maybe, but i want to focus on drawing first and foremost, given my tendency to get too ambitious with projects
>>123115 (OP) 
>>123122
scandi fox saves a collie lady from her human captors, taking her to his hideout where his group will help her

my current curiosity is regarding both who the scandi fox's group is, along with the Grey Khanate, who I assume will be the major antagonist (instead of just being mentioned once and never again)
the main questions I hope get answered (through the comic, please) are: why (do they do this)? followed by how (do they get people to work for them)?
I think the interactions between groups/characters are where the story will be most interesting (versus, say, shooutout scenes)

the only critique I have is: use a different font per character, please, to easily track who is talking
I think it's silly to critique imperfections in the lineart or story as this is the work of one man and not that of a team, and as long as the panels convey a coherent story, then even scribbles could be fine, though that is your choice to experiment with, but I think a high level of detail should be reserved for a few critical panels only to reduce burnout

>>123133
do not unexpand the images, and just continue scrolling down as you click each panel
at least I think this imageboard format reads nicely so far
Replies: >>123317
excellent work I am excited for the rest of it
Mate. This is incredible. Wow.
I was trying to figure out for a second how best to read this. I turned off thumbnails in the settings then downloaded each into a folder and opened them up fullscreen in my image viewer then flipped through each frame. Almost felt like a movie actually, especially with the snow particles. These frames so far would convert very nicely into a GIF or video. They actually have solid cinematography.
The opening frame confused me a bit though. Looks like a feline eye but I guess we're looking through the scope from the muzzle end of the gun.
Now I'm wondering if this trafficking group is related to or the same (or in the same universe) as the one that captured Lily.
A10 kino. Keep going, please. Take breaks if you need to, though. I'll probably always be here to pester you into continuing trust trust <3
Replies: >>123209
>>123133
I can do this (if you don't mind, Mike) minus the audio: convert this into video/GIF format, I mean.
Replies: >>123317
Effortpost.
Awesome.
Fantastic.
>>123158
*downloaded the images
>>123126
She is a vampire. That is why cold can't harm her. It's also why she hesitated to enter the Fox's Den until he invited her in. She knows he thinks he saved her, and is trying to help her.
Replies: >>123216
>>123215
... and that is why she looks so sad at the end. She is going to kill him and drink his blood, but she's going to feel bad about it.  Calling it now.
effortrald
p40.png U A
[Hide] (264.6KB, 1200x1000) Reverse
Replies: >>123333
p41.png U A
[Hide] (187.2KB, 1200x1000) Reverse
gemmy
>>123150
i will hopefully get far enough to answer those questions, but i feel i will leave out a lot, especially since i plan on this being a fairly short comic. though short might be subjective given how many frames ive made
>>123161
i don't mind at all

and thanks to everyone else. i didn't want to reply to each and every post but i'm glad you guys like it so far
>>123287
60 seconds?
THE BOO IS BACK BABY!!!
[New Reply]
27 replies | 41 files | 14 UIDs
Connecting...
Show Post Actions

Actions:

Captcha:

- news - rules - faq -
jschan 1.7.3