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>>125697 (OP) 
Evil??

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AAAAAARRRGH

FUTA GOCKKKKK....!

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#relatable
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No
#cringe
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>>125648 (OP) 
Just play gacha, it has all the baddies already.
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>>125661
noboo is playing gachaslop
>>125661
>literal fursona color schemes
why didn't they hire the guys who designed Lycaon and Pulchra for their furry faction?
Anthros look better with natural color schemes anyways

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sister i'm not much A POET BUT A CRIMINAL AND YOU NEVER HAD A CHANCE
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>>125639 (OP) 
wheeuu i look just like buddy holly
Is the tongue supposed to be brown?

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why did the node cross the street?
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>>125623 (OP) 
To punt a meeb.

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Mouse girl propaganda and image dump
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Loving these rodents <3
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>>125543
They all look like mouse women to me!!
>>125553
Is it true that you love those meeces to pieces?
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>>125562
Very!

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Who is she killing?
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Me. Please.
I don't know, not enough information to make a guess.
clifford the big red dog
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>>125612
nooooooooooooooooooooo~ ;_;
>>125612
yeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeees~ ^w^

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I could win a debate against anyone in anything
What am I thinking about right now?
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I assert that you will win every debate. Fight me
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>>125599
You're pretty good.  Also, check'd.
>>125596
>no argument
I accept your concession
>>125599
>no argument
I accept your concession
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>>125604
I’m holding one finger behind my back. That is my thesis.

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>when the goofy ahh h*moid is talm bout sum "indomitable human spirit" or sum shi so i lowkey bisect him in half with my eight foot long sword
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>>125508
bro it only took me a month but I just finished reading chapter 2. For being a writer or whatever, I fluffing hate reading, probs because I did my life's share of that shit as a whelp. There were a handful of grammatical errors, but it's good overall. It's been a while since I read the first two sections (and I accidentally read earlier draft versions of them instead), so I'm likely forgetting some stuff, but I do have some questions like how in the world everyone so happens to speak the same language. I am enjoying the grotesque character designs and worldbuilding.
The one thing I'd add, really, is just illustrations of the different species and maybe even major characters. That is: I'd embed them in the text itself, or as an attachment or collection somewhere. I say this because, at least early on in those drafts I mentioned, some species names just get namedropped without further description and I'm left scratching my head. Maybe a glossary too for certain terms like "parcel". Though that's not nearly as essential. It's pretty easy to infer those. Especially since the worldbuilding is so alien and it's sci-fi, I think these could work. Think like "species profiles" embedded somewhere in the text.
Maybe that's addressed in the revisions or others have already pointed it out before me, in which case: sorry. gek.
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>>125521
>how in the world everyone so happens to speak the same language
In the prologue, the Elanians know the human language through translation equipment. In the later chapters everyone is Elanian so they all speak the same language. There will be some language barrier issues later on
>The one thing I'd add, really, is just illustrations of the different species and maybe even major characters
Perhaps there can be a collection at the back showing what each species looks like or they can be placed in between chapters as they become relevant
>some species names just get namedropped without further description and I'm left scratching my head
It's a bit difficult to introduce so many species and give them adequate descriptions without slowing the pace to a crawl, but I'll see what I can do
>Think like "species profiles" embedded somewhere in the text
Like a Mass Effect type codex entry? I don't want to do too much lore dumping outside the story itself but perhaps a brief overview is fine
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We will be airdropping this behind humoid lines so they are too distracted to fight back

Also a random little useless detail is that I limited myself to three lines per letter for Myra's dialogue. This is a subtle hint that meebs are retarded
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>>125583
But I wanna hear Meebs go on long monologues though...

Also, this wouldn't distract me... not one bit.
>>125583
>This is a subtle hint that meebs are retarded
gek
also nice stuff

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stupid rabbit
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>>125468
Why would you ask yourself what you already know? Unless, perhaps, you do not know yourself?
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>>125485
You're the sad figment of my twisted psyche's tragic dividend. You're the un-me. I'm the real me you wanna be, me.
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>>125504
Why would you speak so ill of yourself? Do you not love yourself? Love the you that loves yourself. It's what we want.
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>>125505
You'd like me to be you, wouldn't me? But it's too late. You snoze, you loze.
>>125471
Then who was phone?

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